WALT: describe the setting of a story using ‘show’ not ‘tell’
SC:
- to use descriptive language to help the reader visualise the setting
- to use language that activates the readers’ senses e.g smell and sound
- to use similes and metaphors to describe the setting
- to use interesting vocab to describe the setting
Comment from buddy:
I like how you describe the talking like a chainsaw and how you call the principal the boss, you could have said a little more about what the sport you were playing was and you could of had a few more similes and metaphors and also you could have added some more descriptive language to help the reading know what the story is about
- Lachlan
The noisy chatter of people as they walk past. They talk as loud as a chainsaw! I see the swings swinging as I walk past. I walk to the fresh green area and start practicing sport with a ball. I look around and wonder where everyone is. I hear the bell ring and go line up. I walk towards the big carpeted room. I see rows of seats. My row sits down. We waited patiently for the Boss to come up and talk to us. We stand as he enters the room then sit back down. Our teacher hands out our books while we wait for everyone else to arrive and we get time to talk to each other about our work. Once everyone has arrived the Boss speaks. Once he has finished we go back to our room. Then another bell rings and everyone flies out the door.
Can you guess where the setting of my story it?